Looks good from here(;-) Good Job. One thing I do notice is it may be a problem with a heavily nested cut and using an offset probe as teh probe could easily end up in a hole from a previous cut. Maybe consider a compromise of your earlier design where teh Air cylinder was on a slight angle to help slide teh probe tip under teh Torch tip

Also keep teh sliding Z as a backup to the touch probe. Even though I have RARELY ever seen teh G28.1 fail to cycle. But a backup would be nice to have set up as a safety. IF you do not have a breakaway torch mount each time you crash the head and break the torch insulator sleeve it is a $100 bill.
BUT then you get to learn how to get GOOD at repairing those sleeves (;-).
(;-) TP